I met with them, wrote down all of their ideas, and then spent several weeks doing some hardcore brainstorming and reworking, where I kind of had to break apart the outline of their world and rebuild it from the ground up. Then I would bring things to them and say, “What do you think of this, what do you think of this?” I built for them a story bible, essentially a world book for their setting, and then constructed what I thought would be a really great narrative to bridge the two games. I was like an outside expert they brought in to consult on their story.
I’m a writer. This is what I do. One thing I’ve noticed—and I’m a big gamer, I enjoy video games—is that a lot of video game people have great ideas. They have excellent storytelling instincts. What they don’t have, often, is a lot of practice doing it—you get better at telling stories by telling stories. A lot of the video games out there will have this core of awesomeness but a little bit of roughness around the edges when it comes to dialogue, making sure that the worldbuilding is rigorous, making sure that the characterizations are smooth and have nice arcs. I think that’s something I can bring expertise to.
One of the nice things about video games is that it’s a big collaborative effort. There are certain things that a writer like myself should not be involved in. I don’t have any practice coming up with fun ways to play games. I know some writers who assume that because they know how to tell stories, they’ll be able to make a game that’s interesting, but that’s certainly not the case. The developers at ChAIR are experts at making really fun, awesome games. But I can help them with their worldbuilding, making sure it’s consistent; with their dialogue, making sure that it’s both evocative and interesting without being cliched and overdone. I think that the more people with skill in various areas you have working on a project like this, the better the outcome will be.
At its core, a game with great gameplay and a terrible story is still going to be a fun game. But a game with a great story and terrible gameplay is going to be a horrible game. There’s no getting around the fact that first you have to have a very fun game. It just can’t go the other way. So there’s a reason why, historically, some of the writing for video games hasn’t been that great, and that’s because you have to make sure you have a fun game first. That said, the more money that’s being involved in video games, the more production time we have, and the more opportunity we have to really be taken seriously as a large mass media experience, the more time I think can legitimately be and should be devoted to the story. You’ve seen some really awesome games with great stories come out like the Infamous series, for example.
I feel that the dialogue in video games tends to be cliched, and this bothers me because when you have cliched dialogue, you end up with cliched characters, you end up with cutscenes that are just jokes that people skip, and you lose a lot of depth of immersion for these stories. So I would like to see the dialogue get better, and I would also like to see character arcs get better. I frequently see video game characters making big decisions and changes in their lives based on very poor foreshadowing, or very poor character growth, where it’s just—suddenly now I’m a bad guy, or suddenly now I’m a good guy, or whatnot. I would really like to see video games put more rigor into it, to let us experience a character’s growth.